Yun hi chalte hue mujhe tha ek ajnabi mila,
Sath yun chal padi uske ki waqt ka pata na chala,
Fir achanak zindagi mein ek moud aisa aa gaya,
Kho gayin khushiyan sabhi, khud ka bhi na pata chala.
Fir mausam badle kayi, jeene ka naya bahana mila,
Jisko khoya tha kabhi fir se woh afsana mila.
Socha na tha ki hoga suhana yeh safar itna kabhi,
Jisko duaaon mein tha maanga, haan ankhon ko woh nazrana mila.
Dil ne ki thi justzu kabhi, ki apne rab se ek baar milun,
Aur tujh mein hi ae nadeem, mujhe mera khuda mila!
Sath yun chal padi uske ki waqt ka pata na chala,
Fir achanak zindagi mein ek moud aisa aa gaya,
Kho gayin khushiyan sabhi, khud ka bhi na pata chala.
Fir mausam badle kayi, jeene ka naya bahana mila,
Jisko khoya tha kabhi fir se woh afsana mila.
Socha na tha ki hoga suhana yeh safar itna kabhi,
Jisko duaaon mein tha maanga, haan ankhon ko woh nazrana mila.
Dil ne ki thi justzu kabhi, ki apne rab se ek baar milun,
Aur tujh mein hi ae nadeem, mujhe mera khuda mila!
Beautiful thought....love your poetry
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Nimi.. I am glad that you loved it 😍
ReplyDeleteMohtarma bahot Khubssurst likha ha kya khoobsurti ka copyright apne patent Karaya hua ha kya
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha ji Sir bilkul copyright ho chuka hai 😅
DeleteBeautifully conceived....but felt the incense of incompleteness..as if this itself conveying a lot...
ReplyDeleteWanna add something to it ..
Dear Anonymous,
DeleteYour views are appreciated however, every poet has certain thoughts in mind when he/she jots down his/her piece of poetry. The above “nazm” of mine was complete to the end of it :)
But as always, others can always have different interpretations. So it’s so good to read your creativity. But it’s your piece of poem, which is different from original piece written by me. Thanks! :)
ये जो दोस्त थे,जो रक़ीब थे
ReplyDeleteये न हिज़्र थे ,न नसीब थे
ये जिंदगी तो बस एक नज़्म थी
पाकीज़ा थी ये पता नहीं ..
यूँ तो इस सफर में कई दाखिल हुए
बुत के सरीखें यूँ जिस्म से,
ये जो रूह की तिश्नगी मेरी
प्यासी रही,बंजर रही..
अहसास के इस मंज़र में क्यों
इस सफर को बेजां करूँ..
गुजरा हुआ ये जो वक़्त है
अब मेरा यही नदीम है....
Par aapne likha umda hai, lagta hai apko bhi shayari ka shauk hai! Keep it up!
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